Thursday, 20 February 2014

Editing OTS: Finished First Cut & Feedback

  • Today me and Emily finished editing our first cut. Here it is:

Silent Temptation from Sophie Mace on Vimeo.

  • To get initial improvements for our OTS we held a focus group with our peers. We chose to do one with our peers as we wanted critical feedback and thought them the most appropriate to learn from. Click here to see the post with their feedback.
  • In order to get  feedback form our target audience and what improvements they think we could make to our OTS, I have made a feedback sheet in which we will give to people who watch it. Here is the feedback sheet:
    When making the feedback sheet I checked with Emily a couple of times that the questions were suitable:

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