Editing OTS: Feedback Sheet Improvments

After making the improvements our first focus group suggested me and Emily both showed it to other Film Noir enthusiasts. Emily took some sheets and also got some suggestions.

Two of the people watching it whom we got feedback from

A screenshot of Emily's blog post about it and a picture of one of the people she got to watch it

Overall, the feedback we got was mainly positive but there was some improvements suggested which we took action on:

The three improvements were: 

1. Lengthen the sound of the gunshot 
2. Changing the gunshot noise to the same time the killer raises his arm as this could be more effective 
3. Lower the background noise

In response to these we made the following improvements:

1. First suggestion: due to previously trying to do this and it failing we tried a different route, Emily created another gun shot sound to see if that would be better but after adding it and me asking others for feedback on it, the previous one was said to have been better
   

   

   Emily emailed the sound she recorded to me

   

   I added it in to iMovie to see what it would be like

   
   

   

   1. And after sending her a video and asking others we all agreed the previous one was better

   So after attempting to lengthen the gunshot noise we aren't able too.
2. Second Suggestion: Me and Emily had actually previously tried to do this before but in the end preferred it where it is placed now due to the suspense it gives and also due to the placement of the voiceover.
3. Third suggestion: I have muted out the background noise as much as possible but it was challenging due to having to have the volume up enough to hear Emily and Zach's monologue.