Media AS swede from Sophie Mace on Vimeo.
I have uploaded the video on Vimeo so other members in my group can also embed/hyperlink it to their blogs.
- I edited this short piece together even though it is yet to be finished. We haven't managed to finish it due to difficulty finding time to film and other problems we came across.
- For the planning of our sweded film we did it all in lessons and did the filming in our free periods at school. Our planning wasn't brilliant which made it difficult, the lesson I learnt from that was too make sure everything is organised prior to filming etc.
- We didn't storyboard our sweded film due to not having enough time so we wrote what we had to do in a list. I would add the picture for evidence but I'm not sure if one of my fellow group members took it.
I like the range of shots used: there is some sensitivity and control evident
ReplyDeleteBUT
you need to direct actors more to get control over how the narrative is communicated.
try using the embed code so that you can have the video in your blog
now add comments on how the task was organised / creative decisions / technical challenges
ReplyDeletebe critical and consider:
how your compares to other students
how well you met your own brief
how well you delivered the conventions of sweded films